The lockdown, one of the social isolation restrictions, has been observed to prevent the COVID-19 pandemic, and showed that the spread of the virus can be significantly reduced by this preventive restriction.
Do you agree or disagree?
covid-19 has been the dangerous pandemic people had never encoutered earlier. Government has brought the lockdown as the process of preventing public gatherings and people had to stay in their homes which had a beneficial impact in the preventive measures for controlling the virus. I completely agree that lockdown was the imperative decision which helped people not to contract the disease and also this should be implemented if any future attacks that might be predicted.
To begin with, back in 2019 people were busy in there everyday tasks as usual and the news about corono virus began to scare everybody, and then it started spreading worldwide within days and it was a horrible situation where victims had highest mortality rate and respiratory difficulties, this situation was considered as emergency and countries like India, UK, has brought the idea of isolation and avoid gatherings outside which was termed as lockdown, although people were worried about doing their everday chores or attending duties they had an alternative for these tasks and after the lockdown for 3-4 months everyone appreciated the decision which kept them safe from the virus which otherwise might have taken their life.
All the offices have annouced work from home where it was feasible and health care workers were given safety equipment such as personal protection equipments, despite all these measures half of the masses turned out to the positive patients but symptoms were mild and cured easily. These steps had sigificant impact on reduction of the spread and vaccines had a key role in safeguarding the attack of virus.
In conclusion, the lockdown was essential and it was a crucial decision to make stopping activities around the world and making people isolate and restrict gatherings was not an easy task and I personally feel that if it was not for lockdown almost 7 billion people might have already been victims for covid-19.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Covid-19
covid-19 has been the dangerous pandemic people ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
... was a horrible situation where victims had highest mortality rate and respiratory difficul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17515923567 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61250755947 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.091815764 49.4020404114 407% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.142857143 106.682146367 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8571428571 20.7667163134 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166953523335 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867419369141 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453321405009 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10294288554 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641914373449 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.0946893788 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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