The following memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants.
"Recently, butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States. This change, however, has had little impact on our customers. In fact, only about 2 percent of customers have complained, indicating that an average of 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who ask for butter do not complain when they are given margarine instead. Clearly, either these customers do not distinguish butter from margarine or they use the term 'butter' to refer to either butter or margarine."
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.
Companies tend make operational changes in their products or services occasionally to increase the profits and gains. The changes that are beneficial not only to the company’s gains but also to the consumer is proved to successful in the market. The one that are made only with consideration of company’s gains often fail to meet consumer demands and ultimately lead to the downfall of the organisation.
In the memo, the restaurant made a smart choice by replacing butter with margarine with has higher health benefits compared the butter which can lead to increased cholesterol levels in the body. These promotional change proved to be successful in their food houses as the most of the customers couldn’t tell apart the difference between butter and margarine.
The trail of these change has run only in the southwestern branches of the restaurant to see if the change would lead a dissatisfaction in the customer. It’s one of the sharp move by the pancake house to see how their changes will be able to get a word in their regular customers. Sometimes the restaurant make new promotional offers and changes throughout their whole flagships without a trail run which can be quite to their businesses.
Though the result might not be too predictable since the swap that has been made in the food is not only advantageous to the consumer’s health but also is more profitable to the restaurant. This kind of additions is essential for the successful business in the restaurant community.
The taste and quality of the food are the two major aspects that affect the excellence of a restaurant. A food business that can be able to not only prioritise their self pockets but also the customer’s satisfaction will truly succeed to thrive in the competitive field.
Though aspects that are impossible to prevent like disapproval from few customers that unimpressed with the transparency of the restaurant, it should be able to satiate their needs through additional perks and promotions to keep the business engaged.
If the changes in a business that is able to make the amends and meet the required milestones that are both favourable to both customers and their profits, it is safe to make those changes.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ledge required for the workplace but we dont know how to use it in the real time sit...
^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... to use it in the real time situations. we need to know how to use it at the work ...
^^
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ying one semester at foreign we will get a chance to spend time with wide range o...
^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... which develops the quality of team work , leadership and time management while wo...
^^
Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... by thinking from others point of view. this helps us to avoid conflicts arising at ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...work place due to misunderstandings. Because of the above mentioned reasons I think ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, at least, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90310077519 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84328791393 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.661990897 60.3974514979 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.125 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206160239479 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963407045924 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621893201023 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132126592053 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501136202315 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ledge required for the workplace but we dont know how to use it in the real time sit...
^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... to use it in the real time situations. we need to know how to use it at the work ...
^^
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ying one semester at foreign we will get a chance to spend time with wide range o...
^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... which develops the quality of team work , leadership and time management while wo...
^^
Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... by thinking from others point of view. this helps us to avoid conflicts arising at ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...work place due to misunderstandings. Because of the above mentioned reasons I think ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, at least, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90310077519 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84328791393 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.661990897 60.3974514979 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.125 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206160239479 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963407045924 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621893201023 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132126592053 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501136202315 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.