The plans below shows a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The plan indicates the original map of the plan built in the year 1920. At the same time, other plan shows the changes made in the future.
Overall, It can be seen that the name of the park is Grange park.
First of all, let's talk about the entrance, both the entry gates of Arnold Avenue and Eldon street are same as it was built in the past. But, you can find that there's a addition in terms of people who will visit with vehicles, a underground entrance with car park facility. Another major change is with the central fountain which now can be seen as rose garden. Also, the seat positions are moved with respect to the past locations and now it can be seen around the rose garden. Whereas, the rose garden was on three various locations in 1920, and in the present, one near the Arnold avenue gate is still there and the other two are dismantled.
On the other hand, there was a pond for water plants in the earlier days and now children's play areas is been constructed at the same place. After that, just next to the play area a cafe is added as per the modern requirements. The stage built for musicians in the past now changed to a big and advanced amphitheater for concerts; with that, a new water feature is also added for better aesthetics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nstructed at the same place. After that, just next to the play area a cafe is add...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, whereas, first of all, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41452991453 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20946783614 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559829059829 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3880698699 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115114082044 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504183890412 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512239460322 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957083582041 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594348787156 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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