Write a letter to your idol or an inspiring person.
Dear Abel,
Hello, my name is Khang and I'm your big fan from Viet Nam. I have been a big fan of yours for 4 years. And today, I'm writing this letter to you to express my love for you and for your music.
I accidentally know you through your collaboration song with Lana Del Rey called “Prisoner”, I was impressed by your performance and perfect combination in that song. But at that time, I wasn't your fan yet. Until you released the song “Call Out My Name”, and this time was no longer impressive, I started looking for information about you, listening to all your songs and becoming a fan of your until now. I can't think of any words to describe how I felt listening to your music. I just know that when I listen to your music, I can “feel” you through those songs. And that's why I love you and your music.
I hope you will make more good music in the future so that I can be proud as your fan and more and more people will love you and your music as much as I do.
And finally, I'm just happy you get to read my letter.
Sincerely,
Khang.
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| 2022-11-09 | Quỳnh111 | 56 | view |
| 2022-03-08 | phanthiminhanh | 41 | view |
| 2022-03-01 | huynhvuankhang | 89 | view |
| 2022-02-23 | ledotuongvi | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
...ar Abel, Hello, my name is Khang and Im your big fan from Viet Nam. I have been...
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Suggestion: I'm
...ig fan of yours for 4 years. And today, Im writing this letter to you to express m...
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Suggestion: wasn't
...ation in that song. But at that time, I wasnt your fan yet. Until you released the so...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...and becoming a fan of your until now. I cant think of any words to describe how I fe...
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...can “feel” you through those songs. And thats why I love you and your music. I hop...
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... music as much as I do. And finally, Im just happy you get to read my letter. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2243902439 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38203668123 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570731707317 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7994300051 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164358132637 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725724924811 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339551274724 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103442331424 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378361245258 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 50.2224549098 173% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.