When choosing a job salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree

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When choosing a job, salary is the most important consideration
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that the salary is the most important determinant of job choices for job seekers. While I believe this statement may be true for some people, I also believe that others choose their passion based on other considerations.

These days, most laborers are aware of the importance of salary that directly affects their life satisfaction before applying for a job. Having a high income makes people feel satisfied and enjoyable as they can fulfill not only their basic demands but also a higher living standard. For most people, it is no more exciting and happy than spending money for entertainment or individual hobbies such as music, sports or shopping. In contrast, getting a low-paid job means that some of their needs are not accommodated and unnecessary spending must be cut down to avoid financial imbalance. Faced with that case, what only workers wish is nothing more than to quit their current job and get a new one with a higher income.

However, apart from the salary, job seekers could consider other features when choosing their job. Indeed, not only is a job a way to earn a living but it is also a passion. For instance, in order to get the desired employment, some people are willing to receive a lower salary or even work without pay. However, what they could get from this in return is enthusiasm and job satisfaction, which other jobs, even remunerative ones, are unable to offer. Also, when pursuing a dream career, their work productivity could be enhanced and eventually lead to a better income.

In conclusion, it is true that money can be an important factor in a job choice, but this is not the key consideration for everyone

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83972125436 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66442327339 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9475862778 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20425057127 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799367676764 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668045720361 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132580328765 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165419085845 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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