The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects
in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant. Write at least 100 words.
The bar chart shows the number of students who choose certain university subjects in 2005. Overall, Sciences, Mathematics, Literature, and Law are the most popular courses for females. And it’s vice versa, Social sciences, Languages, the Arts remained the most preferred subjects among boys. Sciences is 21.000 higher than female students over 11.000. Next, Mathematics with approximately 18.000 for boys and 4.000 for girls. More male students than female students chose literature to study. Literature with 15.000 for the males compared to above 11.000 for the females. In addition, the law selected by male students was half higher than the figure for the female, 10.000 compared to 5.000. On the other hand, females dominated social sciences with 24.000 and males with 14.000. As for Languages, the number of female students choice is nine times the number of females (18.000 and 2.000). The art was chosen by 8.000 females and 3.000 males. Finally, the figure for Humanities was equal at 12.000 each for both sexes.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-03-10 | dangtainguyen | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, as for, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2256097561 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40255509191 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9685516639 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4166666667 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102580216964 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620703196186 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117543858318 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102580216964 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.