Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Governmental support is an important thing to any project or event, because it gives kind of authority to this project. In considering where the government should spend the money; to support the art or athletics such as state-sponsored olympic teams, I believe that the government has to spend more money in supporting athletics.
First, athletics teams usually participate in many events with other countries, which will improve the communication between the countries, and provide a good impression about our country. For example, when my son was in the olympic team of our country, he meet many friends from another countries, and he was able to talk to them about our cultur. In addition to that., with government">governmental support they were able to invite the other team to our cultural convention,. that's why I think this support is a good thing for the athletic teams.
Second, athletic events mean more exercises and sports, which mean healthier people. In response, supporting athletics teams will encourage people to exercise more. For instance, my twilve years old son was very lazy and fat kid, moreover, he became a pre-diabetic patient because of his weight. In fact, he started to watch the olympics with his school friends, and he was very excited to exercise, so he will be able to apply for one of the olympic games, and now after almost seven years of exercising, he is an essential player in our country team ;healthier person without any major condition - his glucose level is back to normal - and the most important thing that he is happier than before.
In my opinion, having healthier people and keeping a good impression about our country is a valuable matter that the government should consider it in choosing where to put it's support. Furthermore, I suggest that if the government support the kids sport, it will be with adding benifit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07395498392 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11695360397 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549839228296 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4126083907 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278576112652 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123532832369 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123855788426 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200047385115 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114568057567 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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