TPO 54 integrated writing
The article states that the salty of the Salton Sea in California is increasing, and it is dangerous for inhabitant fish and provides three solutions for decreasing salt from the sea. However, the professor explains that reducing salt and improving fish life would be great and refutes each of the author's solutions.
First, the reading states that one option is direct remove salt from seawater by pumping them into chambers and evaporating water. The professor refutes this point by stating that this work will decrease the salt. Still, it would become a big problem, for evaporating seawater besides salt will release some solid material and some toxic chemicals with salt. They are going to air, and it is making big health problems for humans by breathing them.
Second, the article claims that we can dilute the salt level by adding water from the ocean for a lower salt level of the ocean's salt. However, the professor contends that this action will decrease the salt level, but it will need massive construction for pipelines, and the government would not have budgets for the structures, which is huge because the pacific ocean is one thousand kilometers away.
Third, the reading avers that dividing the sea using walls would decrease the salt level. The lecture opposes this point by saying that using walls for dividing unlikely would not work for a long time, for geological are of the sea is very active for earthquakes. After the first earthquake, the earthquake will destroy the walls, and parts of seawater will merge again.
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| 2021-03-02 | Tequila | 75 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01162790698 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38591315341 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1138738424 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.545454545 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267947796979 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107903837173 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060449002309 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169289049759 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373858256855 0.0443174109184 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.