Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
opinions are divided as to whether great leading skills are an outgrowth of nature or nurture. However, being a competent leader necessitates both inborn qualities and experience.
the proponents of the former view would point to the fact that the ability to organize and lead a group is innate as it requires certain decisive elements, including intelligence and authoritarianism. such school of thought is predicated on an assumption that most of world leaders are able to make exceptionally sound decisions and possess high-order cognitive levels, which are not prevalent in the ordinary. Therefore, to successfully lead a major organization or a country to a goal, leading roles should be reserved for those with great mental capacity and an aptitude for giving commands which are of the essence to the development and implementation of a sound plan. For example, Steve Jobs who was a visionary leader of Apple was widely renowned for being not only authoritarian but also erudite in technology and because of such natural qualities, he was able to build an extremely successful enterprise.
However, the latter opinion is based on the understanding that the leadership skills can be acquired through dealing with hardships. in fact, there are a number of factors that an experienced leader need to contemplate before reaching final decisions, such as unforeseen events or risks. However, such invisible factors are usually overlooked by leaders who have not accumulated salutary experience. Consequently, was a plan to be perfectly conducted, a wise leader would need to take into account multiple scenarios and predict as many outcomes as possible. And such leading qualities have been demonstrated in the way leaders of New Zealand have managed to minimize the impact of Covid-19 on the country, which is made possible by experience in handling natural hazards.
In conclusion, I believe to be a great leader, not only does one need certain innate talents for leading but also experience, because without a strong acumen, a leader may not have a reasonable plant, and without valuable experience, they cannot avoid pitfalls in the plan.
- some believe that Increasing travels between countries enables people to learn different cultures However others think this can increase tension between people from different countries Discuss both views and give your opinion 93
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents Ohers however believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety 84
- As the number of cars increases more money has to be spent on road system Some people think that the government should pay for this Others however think that the users should pay for the cost Discuss both views and give your opinion 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, look, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30116959064 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04346638959 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570175438596 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8741442141 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.083333333 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143213837903 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569435461806 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376527478465 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096186282531 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385892834004 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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