Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?
Many countries are suffered from economic downfall and it is argued that nations should focus on their own development instead of providing aid to other countries. This essay will intends to analiyse both views. However, I highly accord with the statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, investing money in the development of infrastructure of a country is lucrative instead of providing assistance to other nations. For example, many countries are suffering from lack of good building and inefficient machines and poor quality of transportation system which created a big hinderence in the development of a country and upliftment of the economy . As a result, concentration on their own country is betterment for a nation and in the enhancement of economy of a country.
Further more, spending money in establishment of small scale industries by administration in rural areas is beneficial to boost the economy rather than providing aid to other countries. For instance, government can establish small scale industries in rural areas as it help increase the employment opportunities for folks which help to increase the per capita income of a country. Investing money in small sectors helps to the overall development of a country. And Therefore, the level of poverty can be decline if more people are employed and it can uplift the economy.
On the other hand providing assistance to other countries is paramount to creat better relation between countries. To exemplifying, there are many circumstances in which a country have to suffer from financial and other damages caused by climate and because of wars providing aid to the countries in their ups and down can help to create a great bonding between countries. Making good relations with other nations can be very helpful for fulfilled the need of scare resources by importing them from other countries. Hence, providing aid to other countries is beneficial for a country.
In conclusion, as per my above discussion although providing help to other countries is helpful to fulfill the need of scarce resources . However, I believe that spending money by government on their own country can help to develop infrastructure and in providing more employment opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28099173554 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07182304645 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457300275482 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7656454571 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.764705882 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279846117487 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102156683265 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739529434305 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17400005021 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572070938813 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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