The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
several people do not attend tertiary education, while they spend a short time either traveling or working. This essay will discuss many benefits and the drawbacks of going on holiday or working.
Firstly, there are two main advantages of traveling or working for the time before attending university. One of the main positive points is that they will expand their worldwide horizons. For example, when these students travel abroad, they will learn about foreign cultures and current market trends, which provides students with opportunities to gain hands-on experience. Another positive point of traveling or working for a short time before studying at university is it gives you time to follow your dream. you will have more time and the chance to reflect on what you love to do, which you neglected in favor of studying, and even discover that you want to go down a different path.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks to spending a short time traveling or working. The first problem is they might lose their motivation to study because they may get attracted to their work and see no point in furthering their education. Second, worse is traveling places many students postpone their studies under the pretext that they want to discover more new things.
In conclusion, while I recognize the possible negative of traveling or working before studying at university, I consider it is a positive development overall.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t you want to go down a different path. On the other hand, there are several dra...
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... it is a positive development overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11063829787 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60842386444 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578723404255 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.767468408 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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