Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this ? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?
Many people choose to settle and remain in their birthplace for their entire life. This may be due to feeling secure in a known location, and has the advantage of continual family support. However, they may risk missing many opportunities by doing so.
Change can be frightening, especially large changes like moving away from a comfortable and secure situation. Most people are risk averse and will only change if they are tangible benefits such as a major penicury improvement. For this reason, many people choose to stay in one location for the entirely of their lives. Another reason is that they may not be able afford to relocate to another area. Moving can be a financially hazardous undertaking and individuals may prefer not to take the risk.
The major advantage of remaining in one place is the support from family and friends. By living in close proximity to parents there is built in baby-sitting for example and the knowledge that should times become difficult the option of moving back into the parental home is available. Not only that but family bonds between the generations can become stronger as they are able to spend more time with each other more easily.
Yet refraining from moving away can lead to lost opportunities, especially in one’s career. To improve your professional standing and income usually requires obtaining superior job which may not be available close by. Refusing to move can mean stagnating in your career and being financially worse off in the long run.
In conclusion, relocating from one’s birthplace can be confronting, especially if one is risk averse. Staying put also builds strong family relationships and the safety of familial support. However it does mean that an individual may miss out on opportunities related to their careers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...t from family and friends. By living in close proximity to parents there is built in baby-sitti...
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Line 9, column 191, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ips and the safety of familial support. However it does mean that an individual may mis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77044773236 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2996687393 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.7058823529 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191063681783 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596568537292 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489845224444 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102053789405 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560537711778 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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