Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born.
What might be the reasons for this?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, with the help of modern technology and vast improvements in communication and transportation, people are getting closer and closer than ever. This makes living far away in a whole different country become a reality that even an ordinary person can achieve. Despite this fact, there is a portion of people who still prefer to be accommodated near their hometown. This essay will explain the underneath motive for this action and delve into its pros and cons.
It is undeniable that living in the same environment provides people with a sense of security and comfort. Conventionally, teenagers are expected to move out and live independently of their parents from the age of 18 to 22. But after many years of getting used to their hometown, changing to a completely different environment is a hard decision to make. Those who accept to move will usually experience insecurity and discomfort as a result. Secondly, a majority of people with stable occupations and finances would not tend to move their accommodation without any serious problems at their place. It is a natural behavior that people will prefer growing their assets and social position at their current place rather than starting everything all over again.
It is a fact that people favor living close to where they’re born as social connection is necessary. Staying close to relatives and acquaintances is one of the essential benefits that people gain. This will nourish people’s relationships, which helps with their mental health, and sometimes provide other aid like job opportunities or business chances based on those relationships' perks. On the other hand, some people believe that living in a similar area will limit one’s growth and vision. Without learning and discovering new knowledge from different parts of the world, people’s horizons will not be broadened. Last but not least, staying in an identical place makes people familiar with negativity. This means that the longer a person lives in one area, the easier for that person to be exposed to some particular negative acts and crimes.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reasons and stated that there are good reasons for staying close to where people were born and also some negative sides to it. Although there are two sides to this matter, choosing where to live all comes down to each individual choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14248704663 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76834897981 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562176165803 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9468899482 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.473684211 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327872140012 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981241770746 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706840628401 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207759419723 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665190264169 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.