st industry.Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Considering the main motivation for visiting museums, it can be attributed to several factors such as having a remarkable enthusiasm to be familiar with historical/historicbackground of a foreign culture, the power of media advertisement, being interested in historical stuff and eventually developing the domain of the historic knowledge. Being one of the most proliferated catalysts to attract people around the world and develop the tourist/tourism industry, the critical role of museums cannot be neglected. Socially speaking, museums can be remarked as a vitrine of a society from antediluvian era to the modern age. The remarkable volume of monumental investment in the museum infrastructures reveals the importance of this topic in the recondite viewpoint of the developed countries. Therefore, visiting museums can be considered as a significant part of people’s travelling element. To elaborate more one the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the first thing comes/ing to the mind of people / the first thing people travelling abroad come up with is who travel abroad is a sequential question about the background of the foreign culture. In/ discussing this subject, a museum can be recognized as the best tool to answer the foreign visitors’ question comprehensively and introduce the country perfectly as well. Needless to say, museums in the most countries have been established in different areas concerning both historic andsocial matters. This covers the vast domain of visitors’ interest. The nature, war, geology, art and even sexmuseums can be accounted as good examples in this discipline. It is also worth noting that the current culture is strongly connected to the past culture. The questions such as how they communicated with each other, how they provided their food, how they brought up their children can be answered during museum visits and grade museums as picturesque encyclopedias.
Another primary reason can be presented as the curiosity of people about historical matters. There is a causal relation between the attraction of people to visit museums on the one hand and the psychological potential about their curiosity on the other hand. Since the appearance / emergence of human on the earth, the curiosity of these living beings to discover the world has been diffused into the vast area. Knowing thoroughly about the past still remains as an unsolvable/insolvable question. Although museums involve enormous disciplines, the museums which concentrate /concentrating on the historic matters are typically regarded as vital elements to decipher the past coding. As a result, museums can be established as an effective tool to clarify some ambiguities when it comes to the precedence of people’s / human life in the past are.
Aside from the above points, the power of advertisement to attract the foreign visitors should not be neglected/ should not be taken for granted. In European countries in which the trace of historical civilization would/ may not belong to a long time ago, the media play a critical role to enhance the features of their museums and churches and reveal them as the worth watching items. Although, these monuments have been established / constructed / built over the past few centuries, the art of media to exaggerate their essences has deceived lots of visitors. On the other hand, there are eligible monuments belonging to thousand years ago in the un/derdeveloped countries that have not been recognized perfectly well in the tourist industry. Therefore, the magnetic power of media is another reason for museum visiting.
To recapitulate, the main driving forces for the people visiting museums and recognizing them as worthwatching places during their traveling abroad can be related to knowing about the history, the role of media and finally getting introduced to / getting familiarized with foreign cultures. Regarding museumsas small parts of a whole country, to my best knowledge, the crucial role of governments to improve the quality of museums and develop them uniquely is critical. Understanding the visitors’ interest in museum industry is the key factor to develop a country on the basis of the economy of tourist industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 103.0 41.998997996 245% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3611.0 1615.20841683 224% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 663.0 315.596192385 210% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44645550528 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07432619952 4.20363070211 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22501104152 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 322.0 176.041082164 183% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485671191554 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1127.7 506.74238477 223% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 17.0 2.52805611222 672% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2078244359 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.740740741 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221950456061 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653940032778 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589957405938 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137069709291 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477415914119 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 196.0 78.4519038076 250% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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