Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.
What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Today, one of the world global problem is homelessness and it is expanding in many cities over the world.
In some countries population are increasing unexpectedly and significiantly, so that is caused homelessness for humans. I think, this happened by lack of accommodation, which have all condition for living or lack of fund for building, buying house. Futhermote, most people used to live without home such as African people. Most people of this continent live in the streets. Not only people who live in Africa, but also countries in this region are poor. In addition, some people tend to live in flat all their live. They prefer to live in flats rather than buy or build home. As humans select comfortable choice for them, around the world a lot of people choose this way.
Most governments are trying to solve this problem. In my view, accommodation should be constructed instead of factories, malls, shops, hotels and so on. Also, for providing with house people should be shortened farming, agriculturing place, because home is more important and profitable than farming.
In conclusion, charities such as UNESCO, UNICEF should separate funding for homeless children and people. In undeveloping countries there is no work or opportunity for people and they need help
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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...unexpectedly and significiantly, so that is caused homelessness for humans. I thi...
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...flat all their live. They prefer to live in flats rather than buy or build home. ...
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...griculturing place, because home is more important and profitable than farming. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14832535885 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85977943345 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8638606042 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8571428571 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146309122869 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566396439883 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638511690771 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104455932863 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732397522333 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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