Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The provided pie graphs depict the percentages of three dissimilar kinds of categories
Overall, the most noticeable thing is that the number of resources exploited by the USA and European countries stay at the first rank. Moreover, this position is true for the population in Asia.

Looking at the graph in more detail, the payment for clothing which is the least common item stands at just 6%. Moreover, the percentage of clothing is less than 2 times in comparison with housing, followed by one-third of the proportion of transport. The expenditures on food and others made up 24% and 40% respectively. Turning to the number of consumpted resources, the number of the USA and European nations occupied the first-place position at 60%, exceeding the figure for other countries, which accounted for 40%.

As for the world population, the biggest percentage goes to Asia, with 57%. Furthermore, 5% of residents are cited as the smallest section, which is half of the population in Africa. The similar rates at 14% can be witnessed in Europe and Africa

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of three dissimilar kinds of categories Overall, the most noticeable thing is th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, look, moreover, so, third, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06285714286 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86156229628 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622857142857 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8593673401 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0631866782704 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266314970072 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306062461729 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324926408165 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212095293581 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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