To succeed in a business, one needs to be good at maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is supposed by some advocates that should a person want to achieve an outstanding career, they need to be excel at Mathematics. From my personal standpoint, I would take a dim view with this opinion due to the following rationales.
First and foremost, we should all acknowledge Maths as a mere subject that exists in every school curriculum around the world. Even when the initiative for taking Mathematics lessons is to enhance the young’s cognitive ability, neither it can have any influence on a person’s performance levels nor task achievements. It is proved by a majority of top-tier scientists that a pupil being gifted at Maths but underperforms in other subjects turn out to exhibit disappointing behaviours during the later life. Moreover, the digital age has given human the ability to make use of computers and machines for calculation-related activities, hence, there is no need to deal with sophisticated figures.
Secondly, it is undeniable that running a business is never a piece of cake in view of the fact that a successful business man is a combinations of various skills and wide theoretical knowledge. There are indispensable traits that one need to possess so as to be successful, time managements skills, diligence, cooperation capabilities, effective communications, high productivity, superb working performance, to name a few. That is to say, a CEO do not necessarily have to be excel at Maths in order to achieve prosperous outcome, instead, people should shift their focus on improving other aspects with the aim of reaching the top position.
In a nutshell, I would not take side with the view that a person should be good at Math so as to have a flourish career since there are other crucial factors in determining one’s achievements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a combination; combinations
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13058419244 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26792018306 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5873717238 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.3 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204727733404 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715057876351 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516667992556 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124076850997 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449308593598 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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