Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions
Not only today’s young generations are able to receive major advantages from the ever changing and developing world, but their problems are also on the rise. In this essay, I will further shed lights on several problems that the youth have to deal with and some solutions to their matters.
When it comes to their matters, it is widely advocated that the fast pace society goes in accordance with the increasing pressure in the workforce. With the availability of high-skilled employees, the job markets in metropolises are becoming more and more competitive than ever. People come to big cities with the aim of having a well-paid job and a better position in this harsh society, they learn and work hard regardless of time just to be able to survive in this fierce competition. It is reported that the average working hours and workloads has increased dramatically in recent years despite the abundant of employees. The second problems that should be taken into consideration is the growth in stress level of the young generations. Metropolis give people the opportunity to move further on their career ladders as well as expand their social circles but at the same time, make way for plenty of mental illnesses. Pollution, traffic jams, peer pressure, unrealistic social media posts all made great contribution to the deterioration of the youth’s mental health. A prime example for this is A, a CEO at a top-tier company, suicided because of depression accumulated through long working hours and stressful social life.
The solutions for these matters may be sophisticated and required the participation of not only the government and big companies but the young generation as well. We should all acknowledge that the expansion of major cities should not take human’ s well-being for granted. Government should enforce more policies focusing on ensuring job security and protecting employees’s rights. Gigantic corporations have to take good care of their staffs’ physical health and mental health rather than putting great emphasis on work efficiency. And in terms of the youth themselves, they should learn how to look on the bright side and adjust their working and living style with a view to satisfy their own standards.
All in all, it is undeniable that the young are facing a great deal of problems and governments, corporations and young adults should lend a helping hand in order to tackle the matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12846347607 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85023697178 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561712846348 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7551834931 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239965762958 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686110560306 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580015265066 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152185491195 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490853007535 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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