It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people think that taking risks is important to us, both in individual lives. In my opinion, it will bring both advantageous and disadvantages.
On the one hand, it is taken for granted that people who take risks will have more opportunities to gain unexpected good results. For example, some inventors such as Edison, Tesla, etc. . achieved accomplishments from a big deal of risky experiments. Therefore, if people are too scared to take risks, they will not have chances to obtain intensive success. Another tangible reason for taking risks is that people can have new experiences. For instance, young generations tend to join in some dangerous activities such á rolling coaster and Parkour because these things give them an unfamiliar feeling compared to some conventional games and sports.
On the other hand, taking risks will bring some significant problems. First, risk takers have to face up with long-lasting effects such as injuries or mental diseases. For example, a footballer who has a leg injury can be left out for approximately six months or longer, so his skills, content and form will significantly decline. Besides another problem is that we will lose our money espeacially in business if we are too risky. If a deal contract is not carefully considered before signed, a businessman will be in danger of bankrupcy
In conclusion, people will gain both negative and positive effects when taking risk. However, sometimes the adverse effects will be bigger than the good ones, so people should think carefully or avoid them if they do not have confidence to make a decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...me inventors such as Edison, Tesla, etc. . achieved accomplishments from a big dea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Achieved
...inventors such as Edison, Tesla, etc. . achieved accomplishments from a big deal of risk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12595419847 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86650156801 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8174729613 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240081190352 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969222732464 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880143353915 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179023163843 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724390516206 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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