In some areas of US, a 'Curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
In some parts of the United States the youngsters are forbidden to move out after a distinct hour after dusk. This "Curfew" is an act of law that disapproves teenagers to step out of home after dark without the company of an adult. However, suited might it be for the provision of security issues, quite a few find it discouraging to their growing young. In this essay I shall be describing both these aspects and end with my opinion.
Maintaining a child's security is vital to his/her life. Parents and governments have always been concerned with strengthening legislations so as to plunge the upsurge of crime rates. Since, most crimes seem to occur in the dark for better camouflage and harder detection, most curfews are imposed then, in order to save our more vulnerable young generation from being either the victim or the convicted.
Adolescence--is a growing period both for the mind as well the physique. While the physical growth can occur with proper nutrition, the brain requires a good intellectual testing background in order to brew maturity and a sense of independence. As perceived by many, setting up such a platform is only possible when the mind is made to deal with practical situations alone without any assistance from others. If the 'learning' teenage mind is hindered from confronting various problems encountered at different times of the day, especially, at night when the 'dangers' are thought to reach their maximum levels then the development phase of such brains would be hampered and would have to endure more challenges in the near future.
Putting them altogether, I do feel the need for individuals to beware of the misconducts that are taking place every now and then and the usefulness of practical experiences in enhancing alertness but at the same time, such exposures should not be too sophisticated for their age. In that way, they can learn from the best in the safest possible way.
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- In some areas of US a Curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless accompanied by an adult What is your opinion about this 89
- In some areas of the US a Curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion about this 89
- In some areas of the US a Curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion about this 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun find seems to be countable; consider using: 'few finds'.
Suggestion: few finds
...e provision of security issues, quite a few find it discouraging to their growing young....
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ncerned with strengthening legislations so as to plunge the upsurge of crime rates. Sinc...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...f the misconducts that are taking place every now and then and the usefulness of practical experie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99076923077 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92590955868 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633846153846 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2061201389 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177786234008 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517960989754 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630104634449 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974836088301 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797608474578 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.