Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged.
To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged.
To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It can’t be denied that the use of fossil fuel is becoming more and more popular especially in various developing countries. This trend is considered the cause of environmental deterioration. Thus the national and local authorities all over the world are encouraging people to use alternatives instead like renewable-energy sources. I believe that this is a positive development.
From my perspective, fossil fuels included gas, oil, coal are being pervaded in manny heavy industries due to its low costs and availability. Additionally, the overconsumption of the world’s resources leading to exhaustion of fossil fuels. Moreover, this is one of the reasons why people suffer from various diseases like despiratory problems or lung cancer as well as habitat destruction. To illustrate, the carbon footprint released on a daily basis contribute to the high rate of environmental pollution. Moreover, fossil fuels are on the verge of depletion and known as finite resources compared to natural resources like wind, sun, water and so on so that green movement should raise public awareness of environmental protection. To illustrate, most nations are facing the scarcity of fuels and materials. Additionally, consumerism is the leading factor behind the over exploitation of renewable energy sources. For instance, more and more people go backpacking and commute to the workplace by private car rather than public transit like subway or bus because of their convenience.
On the other hand, it is believed that wind farms are constructed in many nations with a purpose to substitude the use of fossil fuel. To be more specific, many multinational companies produce electricity without wasting natural resources like coal, or gas. In addition, it helps lower carbon emissions result in ecological crisis and the safety are guaranteed. Moreover, the natural resources will be dwindling shortly in the near future, and it is predicted that people will be likely to utilize renewable energy sources instead non renewable ones in many leading countries like America. Furthermore, heavy industries discharge toxic gas emissions, and chemical wastes like carbon dioxide, or sulfure dioxide into the environment leading environmental degradation such as soil, air and water pollution. To make the matter worse,
To sum up, I believe that people should take advantage of renewable energy sources because of the huge benefits in keeping the environment safe and clean.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43583535109 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11338532159 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549636803874 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2412098274 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.904761905 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296847214268 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956486986217 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12754925525 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23395423143 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175349890997 0.056905535591 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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