Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults. disscus both view and give your own opinion
There is some debate about children should be acquired to be more rivalrous or cooperative person. Although competitive environment is necessary to achieve success in life,I personally believe that involve with a group will teach how be a team player and it will help to develop the level of line of thought.
Providing competition to children might bring beneficial achievement to them. It can be a great motivator to learn, especially at the early stages of childhood. Children learn by observing each other, so this can grow a competitive spirit of them. Furthermore, Healthy competition enhances the IQ which boosts the power of problem-solving.
The ability to co-operate is necessary for all the aspects of their adult life.
Encouraging children to cooperate and teaching them the importance of teamwork may help them develop their personalities. because it can improve the child’s communication and soft skills such as empathy. Moreover, Study with a team is always entertaining and it helps most students to understand the topic clearly. they can discuss in a study session and gather the knowledge.
In conclusion, despite the fact that many individuals suggest that childhood competition is necessary for success and it would teach them to become hard workers, In my perspective, I strongly support that involving children in group-work would help them acquire many skills that would be beneficial to their developing characters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37444933921 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09389127926 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2648828263 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178011432277 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654955867259 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590616630534 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973424152646 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406275193894 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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