children should always follow their parents advice to what extent do you agree or disagree with this
There is some dispute whether youngsters should listen to their parents all the time. I partly agree with the statement as parents as human beings are not always right and they are not capable of giving advices which are out of their base of knowledge.
The first point of view is that parents sometimes may provide their children with erroneous guidance. This is because people’s ability is limited when it comes to issues that are outside of their expertise. Their advices based on speculation towards certain problems of their sons and daughters may cause negative impacts for their loved ones. For instance, children with parents working in information technology field, they are less likely to receive reliable comments on their children’s literature homework.
One of the problem that may cloud parental judgements that the world is changing constantly. The conditions and society the mother and father of children live in may completely different from the time being. To illustrate, there were no personal technological equipment in the past, therefore parents would be unable to give any useful guidance in terms of the proper use of these devices.
Despite these facts, yet there are occasions when the help of parents are extremely necessary. It is common that children often listen to their parents in order to establish relationships with their peers. This is especially true when kids are in their young age and the need for support in dealing with their circle of friend is urgent. However, as children grow up, they are the ones ultimately responsible for their behaviors. Thus, if youngsters keep taking their parent’s advices without having their own opinion, they would suffer from dire consequences.
As the afore-mentioned facts, there are occasions parental roles could supply their kids with unreliable advices due to their restriction of wisdom and the environment they once inhabited. From my view, it would be beneficial for children to attain their parents’ words. However, they should combine it with their own experience to produce optimized results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28528528529 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68647111225 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564564564565 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3170642633 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.529411765 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339896155242 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121737204886 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581112496132 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209570168582 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755733045935 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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