The map below show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features relevant.
The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future.
The map give information about how the industrial area will falsity into a housing area in the future.
It is clear that entrance and reception witness radical change with the most noticeable being the parking and storages in the main road.
The industrial area in now have designed including six office and one canteen, one factory, entrance and reception, parking and storage and three main road. The main road accessible one parking and storage is below to parking. Look at the map in the future, the parking and storage is replaced is 3 bedroom house and 4 bedroom house. With factory and canteen located convenient way for people, the factory in front of eastern main road and the canteen next to office.
While the main road remain in 4 directions, and go to housing area we will see parking gagares first. Meanwhile, compared in the life now, in the future industrial museum will become housing area and have 7 bedroom house, apartment, 2 parking, 6 bedroom house. Besides, 6 offices and one canteen will replaced is parking and apartment. With area remaining is entrance and reception replaced 6 bedroom house and communal garden is below it.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features can be seen that, the housing area have many places in the future than now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...ng and storage is replaced is 3 bedroom house and 4 bedroom house. With factory and c...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...placed is 3 bedroom house and 4 bedroom house. With factory and canteen located conve...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
... become housing area and have 7 bedroom house, apartment, 2 parking, 6 bedroom house....
^^^^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
... house, apartment, 2 parking, 6 bedroom house. Besides, 6 offices and one canteen wil...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'replace'
Suggestion: replace
...Besides, 6 offices and one canteen will replaced is parking and apartment. With area rem...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...trance and reception replaced 6 bedroom house and communal garden is below it. Summa...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86497890295 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48247610331 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7097066069 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457037589279 0.215688989381 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189491470997 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172688533721 0.0843802449381 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303619882431 0.15604864568 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183755230826 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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