Some people think that technological development can reduce crime, while others think that it would encourage crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary life, there are many technology devices such as mobile phones, tablet and computers. Some people believed that this is one of the important part to reduce crime. However, other people believed that is the factor encourage crime. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of technological development can reduce crime. First, government subsidies for technological development are believed to equalize working opportunities among young adolescents regardless of their background family. This technological support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall working rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority. Moreover, technological development can solve many problems among young people when they working, especially they can working or studying online, this can reduce disagreements and crime. Second, technological development probably result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that technological development is imperative to foster knowledgeable and skilled human capital in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once technological development and about crime. First, technological development would likely correspond with awareness of information and tremendous financial strains on a country. Generating no income from fees or tuition because people can study at home,school could become over-reliant on the state budget for funding, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Not only technological development we also have many social media, this is the best place that people can reach any information and some bad information can affect on violence behavior and increase crime. Second, technological development tend many young people including who are not academically inclined or show no interest in education, especially they can’t awareness bad or good information, thereby, adding great burden for government and society. It, instead, would be a more viable option if the resources were focused on supporting prevent people and education or allow rules.
In addition, this argument has advantages but disadvantages is outweigh. In my opinion, we need to thank for technological inventions but also need to use greatly. Especially, government need to solve not only problems like crime in social media and also in real life to have a better society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'work'.
Suggestion: work
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tuition because people can study at home,school could become over-reliant on the ...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...ent has advantages but disadvantages is outweigh. In my opinion, we need to thank for te...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ially, government need to solve not only problems like crime in social media and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75765306122 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16428452145 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3132808098 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.789473684 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320991289147 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108033061333 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850900926667 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190405983967 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703914576649 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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