Today more and more tourists are. Visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert and the Antarctic.
What are the benefits an disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?
In recent times, an increasing number of tourists goes to areas where the situations are not favourable like the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. This essay will expantiate on the merits and demerits that may be experienced while visiting these places.
To begin with, there are a lot of disadvantages that accompanies visit to such places. Firstly, the tourist are liable to be injured and can also get sick. The former could be due to bad roads thereby making people to fall and sustain sprain to arm or leg. The latter may result following poor availability of food and drinks possibly leading to loss of glucose and energy as well as dehydration. In essence, the tourist may be worn out from the trip.
Turning to the advantages of tourism to difficult places, it spring up confidence in a person and also enable the individual to adapt in difficult situations. To illustrate, the climatic changes which could be too hot or too cold when endured could make a person to be able to abode in any part of the world when circumstantial. Besides, informations retrieved from the tourism can be incorporated into the academic fields and further research can be embarked upon if need be. Hence, unfavorable tourism may be beneficial to individuals as well as to the institutions.
In Conclusion, visits to unsuitable tourist locations such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic could have some drawbacks, including getting injured and sickness to the tourist but can also have substantial benefits in terms of making a person to be courageous and adding knowledge to the academic fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'springs'?
Suggestion: springs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96254681648 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87712615791 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5050304219 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166790467597 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656812078397 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754744037906 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125829883654 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730978280009 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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