The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
History is a proof for the statement that great leaders are born due to their sense of cooperation and not because of their sense of competition.Be it the field of decision making, or researching in the field os science great leaders among us have always immerged as people who have a sympathetic and empathetic nature towards others.
Human being is a social animal and where competion is imperial for survival without a symbiotic bond or corperation human being would have barely evolved and survived the tide of time.
When an indivisual tries to compete with other indivisual he forgets to improve himself and and always strives to do better than his competition , whereas a true leader would always find growth potential in improving on his own drawbacks and negative points. One becomes more cognizant about the feeling of the people around him while working in a team, this a quality which makes a good leader.
While playing a sport it is extremely important for each member of the team to coorperate with each other and not compete with each other. A feeling of competion with a member of one's own team would create a conflict and would finally result into the team loosing.On the other hand there should be a healthy competion between two teams playing opposite each other.
Great leaders like Mahatama Gandhi, Nelson Mandela, Barack Obama and many others were famous for their sense of cooperation.
In conclusion instilling a sense of cooperation in its youth a society can make the great leaders for world to see. Although a healthy competion is a trait that might come handy but cooperation would go a long way
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Be
...t because of their sense of competition.Be it the field of decision making, or res...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ndivisual he forgets to improve himself and and always strives to do better than his co...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...trives to do better than his competition , whereas a true leader would always find...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...mes more cognizant about the feeling of the people around him while working in a team, this a quality...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...ld finally result into the team loosing.On the other hand there should be a health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, still, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 277.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91696750903 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58920853315 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.372934145 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.333333333 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213387906825 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930055447529 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718587373156 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111415516627 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678330980512 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.