As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction.
To what extent do you agree with such a procedure?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
A minority of individuals in the current contemporary society believe that the ideas of cloning in order to increase equality in work is becoming closer to the reality. Whereas others believe that this is horrible and should not be turned to reality. The further essay will discuss both sides and give the opinion to the issue above.
On the one hand, cloning technology can help citizens develop and modernize different industries in a country. For instance, in health industries, scientists and pharmacologists can use clones to replace human in dangerous experiment that have a substantial effect on individual’s life. Hence, human can minimize the amount of time for vaccine research and other medicines. Furthermore, clones being supplied for hospitality could be consider as one of the most important benefit. In fact without thinking about humanity, this is a plethora of breakthrough in the development of the world.
On the other hand, although cloning technology brings several trinormous benefits for inhabitants, the amount of finance and time to create them are ginormous. Moreover, scientists and investors not only need to have experience, knowledge but also need a stable diligence and perserverance. In general, in order to create a clone, biologists and scientists need to have technologies that can transfer the correct DNA and other body structures. Thus, this required many techniques that majority of the scientists can not afford. Likewise, the world will lose a large amount of fortune and time fun for the others fields’ development.
In conclusion, from my perspective, i do not agree with this notion. Cloning technology is not suitable for human and can bring many issue for the world's health and budget. Otherwise it will have a momentous influence on the world’s budget.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun issue seems to be countable; consider using: 'many issues'.
Suggestion: many issues
...is not suitable for human and can bring many issue for the worlds health and budget. Othe...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... human and can bring many issue for the worlds health and budget. Otherwise it will h...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00787087615 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3047008441 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939115354882 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032469899061 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334681097314 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641577417138 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259267278227 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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