The pictures below show the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles

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The pictures below show the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles.

The diagram gives information about how clothes are manufactured from recycled plastic bottles.
In general, there is a total of 13 steps, including three main stages: collecting recycling bottles from garbage dumps, weaving, and finally completing products like t-shirts and jeans.
Firstly, bottles are gathered from garbage collection places in the city, these plastic bottles are delivered by garbage trucks to recycling factories. After that, workers sort plastic bottles manually and send them to the crashing funnel-shaped machines to cut into small pieces by two grinding parts. Next, the cutting pieces are rinsed with washing equipment and dried in the sun for 10 hours.
The next stage is melting small plastic pieces into melted plastic and pouring this liquid into tube molds with small holes. Then the yarn is produced and sewed by winding machine into rolled cloth, which is finally processed into end products, namely t-shirts, food containers, and bags.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45033112583 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43395277991 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695364238411 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.101242903 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25295558751 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113331853382 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079932615318 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155073222277 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548583552015 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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