9/12/2020-20/02/2021: Some people believe that children should do organised activities in their free time while other think that children should be free to do what they want to do in their free time. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, parents carefully pay attention to the development of their children. Although many people argue that children should be liberty at to do everything that they want, I still believe that leisure activities of children should be organized by parents or scheduled organization.
On the one hand, there are various reasons explained why children should be allowed free play in their spare time. The first reason relates to independent individuals, kids can learn how to entertain themselves, and this helps them learn to think independently and develop decision-making skills. As a result, doing what they want provides opportunities for children to discover what interests them and what they are good at. Moreover, the freedom of playing builds a child's creativity and ability to come up with unique ideas that help them create and carry out ideas, actions, and activities.
On the other hand, I still believe that parents are well-positioned to decide on the most productive leisure activities. Firstly, taking part in social activities makes children more sociable and integrate with peers and society in the future. As the result, kids benefit from developing communication skills and learning how to express themselves in the public. Also, parents can discover their children's new talents and abilities and find ways to maintain and improve them. Furthermore, when children join in social or group activities, they have to learn how to come up against difficulties which helps them gain more experience and helpful skills in the future.
In conclusion, although children should have a choice in terms of what leisurely activities to take up, parents should still have some control over these activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36296296296 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88716947882 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6135979597 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284959328043 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101838555768 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961535246413 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183786807147 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792115017326 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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