Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Human life has drastically evolved over the years due to various factors and as a result of which some people are of the opinion that we have way too many choices while, others oppose this thought. I, however certainly agree with the former opinion.
Back in the days when wheel was the newest invention, society had a very clear and limited things for people to do for their living. Few of which are farming, serving as a soldier for their country, selling the essential commodities. But over the years, with the upcoming of industrialisation and globalisation, variety of occupations have taken birth. Today with technology, we have occupations ranging from an astronaut to delivery agent. People have a variety of options in every field and some of which value skills rather than a college degree. As a result of which, people nowadays are confused with their career paths and there are instances were people practise two jobs at a time, one acts as their main source of income, while other one serves their passion. For instance, most of people work in tech industry for money, while their interests lies in entertainment industry because of which they have a side hustle and work as social media influencers.
Additionally, people are overburdened with the choices available in technological devices as well. For example, when phones were invented there were hardly a few companies that manufactured it like, AT&T and in case of mobile phones there was a basic Nokia set. Cut to the 21st century, we have approximately more than 10 brands of phones all over the world that posses variety of unique features. Furthermore, a similar trend is observed in rest of the devices as well, nowadays there are smart home appliances that have greatly reduced the work burden of women that used to toil in kitchen for hours together because of which women are able to venture into different fields of work.
In conclusion, a deeper look into the modern world reveals that we do have numerous choices in every aspect of our life.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...one serves their passion. For instance, most of people work in tech industry for money, while ...
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Suggestion: posses'; poss's; posse's
...rands of phones all over the world that posses variety of unique features. Furthermore...
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...observed in rest of the devices as well, nowadays there are smart home appliances...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91569767442 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63756041047 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572674418605 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9554681682 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.785714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244357335663 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856121902807 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593423882725 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160153807114 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633396525751 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.