The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved
to the capital city of a particular country
The line graph illustrates four different causes for moving to the capital city by residents in particular nation from 2000 to 2015.
Overall, what stand out from the line graph is people move to the capital for the purpose of employment was highest, while adventure reason was lowest during the period shown.
In 2000, about 60000 people relocating to the capital for work. In the same year, the number of residents moved to the capital to study took up 25000, while visiting family or friends and adventuring reasons were lowest, at 10000. From 2000 to 2010, four causes for moving to the capital city all increased. The number of people moving to study rise steadily and reached the highest point of approximately 92000 in 2010. This figures for taking a course continued to increase, at 55000. In 2010, the amount of people visiting their family or friends and traveling grew to around 22000 and about 12000 respectively, in the given period.
From 2010 to 2015, the notable thing from the line graph is the employment reason was the only one of the four that underwent a downturn whereas the remaining reasons were a stable growth. The number of people moving to the capital for employment reasons dropped insignificantly to about 88000. In contrast, the number of people moving to the capital for the purpose of studying rose heavily from 55000 to around 88000 in 2015. Meanwhile, the gradual and stable increase was seen in the category of family or friends reasons and adventure reasons, in 2015, this figures reached about 22000 and 15000 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble increase was seen in the category of family or friends reasons and adventure ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92803030303 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48985256938 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462121212121 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5124503255 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.416666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221792176041 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100428392979 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578835410058 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163946913053 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178816538796 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.