Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Under the influnece of epidemic and market saturation, complaints arise that the opportunity to find a satisfying job is decreasing drastically. However, some young people still state that even if there appeared a secure job they would stick to their optimal choice. As for me, I firmly stand that seizing the current opportunity will apprantly be a wiser choice compared to insist on the satisfying position. The detailed discussion will be as followed.
First and foremost, temporarily taking the less perfect job does not equate with abandoning the pursuit of a better job. Some may pessimistically mistaken the fact that their life will remain the same once they choose one job. Contrary to what they believe, taking the secure job will not only relieve the financial burdern but also accumulate working experiences as well, which equips the young generation with necessary resources and abilities required for the future. To put it another way, the seemingly ordinary or even boring occupation can pave the way to a promising dream position rather than just waiting the opportunity to appear itself. Continuously chasing after the stasifying job, by contrast, is just a waste of time given the severe competition of job market. The vacant yet appealing job position is more willing to open to those who have relative working experiences in the field.
Furthermore, taking the secure job indicates the wisdom of balancing and the courage to take responsibities. People will all encounter similar situation where they are forced to make unwilling decision. It seems more decent to always chase after the glamorous job and it is what people have been encouraged. The fact is that, by contrast, there are some people who actually need the job to support the family, say the only working father in the family. Take the example of my uncle, James, who was once dismissed by the corporation and started working as a client to pay the family bill afterwards. Only by finding a secure and stable job can James support the entire family where two daughters would enter the university even though he was previously a manager in the former company. James never viewed the job as loss of dignity, yet claim it a rather precious chance to take the resposiblities after losing the job. Therefore, for many people, choosing the stable job will enable them to solve the trouble and shoulder responisiblity.
To conclude, people should take the secure job if it is possible even though deep inside they are not satisfied with the current occupation. Through this safe job, they can accumulate experiences and learn useful knowledge, meanwhile starting to shoulder responsiblity as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11161731207 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76731720818 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553530751708 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5531775604 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.95 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348190918084 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104180459907 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446772018126 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221007861056 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148427223911 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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