The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I somewhat agree to it, but with certain conditions which need to fulfilled. In leadership one requires to have a sense of cooperation as well as competition.
Cooperation is good way to increase efficiency as it emphasizes on collaboration and betterment for all. For example, let us consider a person who has been cooperating with people for a long job, he or she would be able to know the division of tasks, what are each person's strength and weaknesses, and how to make the whole team cohesive. At the same time, Competition itself can get a bit toxic for people, which might not only make them a bit unable to cooperate with their contemporaries and the people working under him/her but also might make them compete even when it is not needed. Let's consider a situation where a person is been competive his/her whole life, now if that person is appointed as a leader in some field, then he/she would find it harder to work together and might even compete with his/her subordinates as they might replace him/her.
Instillment of cooperation can be a good way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership, but one has to keep in mind that leadership often requires to take initiatives and have an independent mindset which might not to be that intrinsic to people who have been instilled with a sense of cooperation. For example, let's say a person is a CEO of some company, now that person would have certain competitors, the CEO has to have a sense of competition by coming up with better products, competitng with lower price, attracting more customers through advertisers and so on. The set of skills required cannot be achieved solely on the basis of cooperation.
One could however argue that we have been intrisicly instilled with a sense of competition because of our primal past, but one could not make the same case for cooperation. From the primal times, humans have tried competiting with one another, but it is only after we have cognition revolution that we have been able to cooperate with one another. Apart from that, one could question how is one instilled with a sense of cooperation, as that might be strenous. For example, if a student's been told to cooperate with other classmates on a project, but they are unwilling to work or incompotent, one might be incentivized to cooperate in the future.
Hence one has to be instilled with a sense of cooperation in the right condition, along with some instillation of competition as both would be needed for a position in leadership.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ow the division of tasks, what are each persons strength and weaknesses, and how to mak...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...hem compete even when it is not needed. Lets consider a situation where a person is ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndependent mindset which might not to be that intrinsic to people who have been i...
^^
Line 7, column 478, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...that might be strenous. For example, if a students been told to cooperate with other class...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...tivized to cooperate in the future. Hence one has to be instilled with a sense of...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, well, apart from, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79128440367 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86978119299 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470183486239 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4165544625 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.214285714 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1428571429 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224192166774 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967761160864 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721779346746 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152214602456 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401589266029 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ow the division of tasks, what are each persons strength and weaknesses, and how to mak...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...hem compete even when it is not needed. Lets consider a situation where a person is ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndependent mindset which might not to be that intrinsic to people who have been i...
^^
Line 7, column 478, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...that might be strenous. For example, if a students been told to cooperate with other class...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...tivized to cooperate in the future. Hence one has to be instilled with a sense of...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, well, apart from, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79128440367 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86978119299 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470183486239 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4165544625 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.214285714 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1428571429 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224192166774 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967761160864 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721779346746 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152214602456 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401589266029 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.