An international organization started issuing certificates to companies for maintaining high ecological standards.
An international organization started issuing certificates to wood companies who mainly focuses n maintaining high ecological standards in order to motivate ecological sustainability. And American companies will also make efforts to obtain this ecocertification. Furthermore , to acquire this certification one must pay a certain amount ,which indirectly will be borne by the consumers.The American consumers are not most likely to pay higher price for the product. In addition, they don’t show great trust in advertising claims as well. Considering these two facts the American companies will consider selling products than a Ecocertifiction. An ecocertfied American company will have to sell their products outside of USA in order to earn profit. On the other hand , American companies make their huge profits by selling their products within USA itself.
The lecture contradicts some of the points mention in the passage. To commence, he states that Americans differentiate between advertising claims. For instance, Americans who have ecological perspective ,for them an international ecocertification equals trust and reliability. Further the lecturer also mentions about how in the current years the Americans are choosing a lifestyle without causing any harm to the environment and taking into consideration of preserving the environment.
To compete the ongoing competition with the other foreign wood companies ,US should plan their strategies in order to capture the market. If not, the American market will start flooding with the foreign certified products ,resulting into capturing American population as well.
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- In an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recycling materials Companies that receive 80
- Earlier people consumed healthy foods than today do you agree or disagree on the same give examples and details for the same 75
- An international organization started issuing certificates to companies for maintaining high ecological standards 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 238.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83613445378 5.08290768461 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29359384513 2.5805825403 128% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.55342163355 122% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6865412736 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268868186787 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920307471523 0.0996497079465 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165260698009 0.0662205650399 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148823566429 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105483507897 0.0443174109184 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.8541721854 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.0289183223 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 12.2367328918 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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