In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else.
Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
Modern era is the era of globalization. It is a common trend nowadays that people need to live apart from their home for working or studying . People always look for better work or study opportunities. Sometimes it is very difficult to find a good opportunity to work or study near by his or her hometown. For this reason they cannot but stay alone in other suitable places. Though there are some minor disadvantages of staying apart from the family, I strongly believe that there are lots of benefits to go with the good opportunities apart from people's hometown.
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