Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush.What are the reasons? It is a positive development or a negative development?
It is irrefutable to state that writing skill is play prominent role in pupils life to pass examination. Least individuals at present write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush.There are multifarious reasons behind this trend as people can store their data for long time and they have hectic schedule.However, it is a negative development as folks are forgetting writing skill
To commence with reasons ,new gadgets has less chances of mistakes. Dwellers use new methods of writing because it cannot make errors during writing. To exemplify, computer is used to write something which performed less mistakes. In addition to this,new techniques provide editing process .As people can edit their writing task using modern techniques,they can write their work into effective manner. resultantly they do not need do hard work.
Moving further, individuals can store huge data for long time.When they will use modern equipments for writing, they can easily stored use information in one place for further use.To illustrate, pen drive is used to store bulky data. moreover,folks have hectic schedule.They have no too much time for write by hand so they always prefer new gadgets that save their quality time.Eventually they can write lengthy task into few seconds.So,how it is the negative development if factions can store large amount of data.
Now discussing negative development,students are forgetting writing skills. While using modern equipments,they will not do practice for their exams that is based on writing.As a result, they cannot achieved good marks in school examination. What is more,it reduce the writing speed of educators.Since they are not write by hand,it put adverse impact on their writing speed. To epitome,most of children are using mobile phones for typing owing to which their writing speed is declined.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly, writing skills are dwindle day by day using new electronic equipments. although students are forgetting writing skills, yet individuals can store bulky knowledge for long years using new writing technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, in addition, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44236760125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09861908008 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0814988227 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.785714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221943231899 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848012604572 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634587082501 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14417553683 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615591532327 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.