The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age group of residents in the UK in 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparison where relevant.
The provided bar graph illustrate the outlay on three distinct classification among different age grouping of united kingdom native in 2004.
Overall, it is clearly seen that golden age group people were spent maximum money on food and drink as well as on entertainment, while spending of younger individuals was minimum on all categories.
Now looking at the details,in 2004, in the united kingdom youngsters were payout their money on food and drink along with entertainment was declined,which accounted nearly 5%, followed by restaurant and hotel was upsurge gradually,which was around 15%. Moreover,the other age group from 31-45 spent most money on food and drink beside with the restaurant and hotel,which stood at approximately 12% .Meanwhile, the remaining expenditure of 31-45 age group on entertainment was dwindle,to almost 7%.when the spending of 42-60 age group on food and drink was above 15%, the restaurant and hotel along with entertainment was well below 20%.
Probing ahead, elder individual spent their Monetary sources on food and drink as well as entertainment inclined significantly,which registered 20% and nearly 23% respectively.The 61-75 age group spent there cash on restaurant and hotel was dropped considerably,to just 1%.However the golden age people spend money on restaurant and hotel stood above 5%,whenever their spending on food and drink was hold dominant position,which was well above 20%.The payout of old dwellers of the UK on entertainment was observed gradual increased to approximately 12%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54042553191 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29454602325 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527659574468 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.4926829268 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.106178129 43.030603864 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.4 112.824112599 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 22.9334400587 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.2 5.23603664747 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105254594611 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806085311116 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062579634071 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904908082086 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606088575382 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 13.2329268293 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 61.2550243902 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.9970731707 189% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.