Students today can access information online, so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to state that online libraries are digital way to acquire data. Nowadays trainees can retrieve knowledge online, so physical libraries are not essential. I agree with this statement to a large extent as tutees can save their quality time and they will get updated information.
To begin with learners can easily retrieve information. As they will get a material using digital library, they can obtain data without travelling physical library. For instance, students use mobiles phones to grasp details by doing a single click. In addition to this, it reduces the use of paper. Recent researchers claim that two trees are used to produce 100 papers so trainees should use digital way to obtain data. Eventually, we can save environment by using less paper.
Moving further, scholar's can save their time. They have no leisure time to visit physically in library, as they will use digital sources to obtain information. Resultantly, they will get data within few seconds and save their quality time which use for other purposes. Moreover, kids will acquire updated knowledge. While using electronic gadgets, they can get upgraded study material from websites. To exemplify, most tutees can download pdf files from websites where data upgrading in every hours. So, why not students today receive data online if it reduces the use of paper?
I may not overlook other side too, libraries helps students to concentrate on their study. They visit to library because they need quite place where they can study without any distraction. To epitome, most University learners claim that they can get concentration in university library. What is more, sometimes digital assessing of data is require to pay some money. When tutees want to download full book from internet, it is possible by paying some amount of money. Consequently, it escalate burden on parents.
Recapitulate, undoubtedly, online access of data provide more benefits to students. Although libraries helps them to concentrate on their education, yet they can save their quality time by assessing materials online.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ees can download pdf files from websites where data upgrading in every hours. So,...
^^
Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... sometimes digital assessing of data is require to pay some money. When tutees want to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: paying
...es digital assessing of data is require to pay some money. When tutees want to downloa...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 486, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'escalates'?
Suggestion: escalates
... some amount of money. Consequently, it escalate burden on parents. Recapitulate, und...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28143712575 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68383073211 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541916167665 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3574104334 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17273736212 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544942866358 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485987729737 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114347363033 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453813775463 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ees can download pdf files from websites where data upgrading in every hours. So,...
^^
Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... sometimes digital assessing of data is require to pay some money. When tutees want to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: paying
...es digital assessing of data is require to pay some money. When tutees want to downloa...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 486, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'escalates'?
Suggestion: escalates
... some amount of money. Consequently, it escalate burden on parents. Recapitulate, und...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28143712575 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68383073211 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541916167665 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3574104334 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17273736212 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544942866358 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485987729737 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114347363033 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453813775463 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.