Some people believe that newspapers are the best source of news. Other people think that the news is presented better on radio or television. Which of these sources of news do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your choice.
In our daily lives, reading news is the very common habits among people. There are many different kinds of sources of news can be read, like newspapers or
radio
or television and so on. For me, I would like to choose
radio
and television.
First, the time validation of
radio
and television are much better than newspapers. time validation represents if the news is lastest one or not, which imply whether this news is useful or not. For the
radio
and television, it will cast the lastest news because they are spreaded by light-fiber. However, after newspapers have been edited, pressed and published, some information have already no use like stock trendcy.
Second, listening to a
radio
or television are more convenient than reading newspapers. Nowdays, people can just use bluetooth to connect with
radios
or televisions to listen to the cast. Compare to the
radio
and television, reading newspapers will be more unconvenient because when you are reading, you can't move anywhere.
Third, buying a
radio
or television will be save more money than purchasing weekly newspapers. you can use one good
radio
or television for more than five years, but you need to buy newspapers every week even everyday which will cost you more. As my dad, after he bought a new
radio
, it has already five years that he has not purchased any newspapers.
In conclusion, choosing
radio
or television as your sources of news will be better that choosing newspapers. using
radio
or television so that you can enjoy the lastest news, which will not only save your money but also easier to listen to. so that is why I choose
radio
and television.
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- Some people believe that newspapers are the best source of news Other people think that the news is presented better on radio or television Which of these sources of news do you prefer Use specific reasons to support your choice 60
- Some people believe that newspapers are the best source of news Other people think that the news is presented better on radio or television Which of these sources of news do you prefer Use specific reasons to support your choice 60
- Some people believe that newspapers are the best source of news Other people think that the news is presented better on radio or television Which of these sources of news do you prefer Use specific reasons to support your choice 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: You
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05035971223 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65162249604 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3597988617 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.75 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304874889126 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109814181383 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696850881318 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886088092742 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868755332899 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.