People should be able to keep all the money they earn, they should not pay tax for the state. Agree or disagree?
It is often believed by a section of people that taxes should not be paid, and they should remain in possession of all their income. In my opinion, I agree with this point of view because the state gets revenue from other sources, in addition, taxes are usually not properly accounted for.
Taxation which is considered as the major source of income for development by the state is in most cases not accounted for in a prudent way. In other words, it is mostly argued by the opponent of taxation that all monies accrued from taxes are not remitted to the government coffer. As a result, it goes into the account of individuals, who corruptly enrich themselves and their families. Nigeria, the most populous nation in Africa, for instance, is reported in the New York Times to have not audited tax income for about 10 years due to corruption. This has made so many people lost confidence in the government and think it is right not to pay taxes.
In addition to trust issues, a plethora of people have thought that since there are other ways to generate income, the government should focus on that means of proceeds for development. In their word, they argue that sales of natural resources such as crude oil and precious stones make up about 80% of the total annual budget. Therefore, there is no reason for taxing the citizen as those sales will cater to all the needs for the year.
In conclusion, there is no doubt taxes have been made mandatory in many countries, however, the sources of income for the state is enough to develop the country. Moreover, the lack of trust in the government is why taxes should not be paid.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gets'' or 'get's'?
Suggestion: gets'; get's
...th this point of view because the state gets revenue from other sources, in addition...
^^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a prudent way" with adverb for "prudent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tate is in most cases not accounted for in a prudent way. In other words, it is mostly argued by...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63793103448 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43664307782 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3062137893 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318278194966 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110459883258 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877789573416 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204665779593 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818111763184 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gets'' or 'get's'?
Suggestion: gets'; get's
...th this point of view because the state gets revenue from other sources, in addition...
^^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a prudent way" with adverb for "prudent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tate is in most cases not accounted for in a prudent way. In other words, it is mostly argued by...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63793103448 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43664307782 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3062137893 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318278194966 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110459883258 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877789573416 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204665779593 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818111763184 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.