People should be able to keep all the money they earn, they should not pay tax for the state. Agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a minority of individuals in the current contemporary society believe that people sould keep all the finances that they earn rather than pay taxes for the state. From my perspective, I do not agree with the notion above, the further paragraphs will discuss and give reasons for my opinion.
On the one hand, several citizens are now anxious and struggling with their salaries and income due to the current unstable world situation. For instance, the Russian-Ukrainian war has led to a rise in gasoline prices and influenced the global economy. As a result, individuals have a tendency to minimize their spending on daily necessities and keep their salaries rather than pay taxes to the government. Moreover, the Covid 19 padmemic also have substantial impact on major companies and workers. Nonetheless, citizens should have a higher awareness that paying taxes is still necessary to ameliorate the economy and ensure the price of gasoline.
On the one hand, paying taxes for the state and government results in not only refurbishing the state’s facilities but also a plethora of breakthroughs in the modernization and industrialization processes. In particular, if the general department of taxation receives a large amount of taxes, a tremendous investment will be made in three different industries, namely, the scientific, technological, and educational industries. Hence, the developing of severals industries motivate workers and create new jobs for the society, thereby redue the gap between richs and poors.
In conclusion, every citizen should have an obligation to pay taxes to the state and government. Otherwise, society and industries won’t have enough fortune to develop effective and sustainable practices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51119402985 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17564058715 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1119298368 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.083333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276132019988 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852996009895 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964363512132 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152920814583 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685349001187 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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