The diagram show the space journey of Soyuz rocket.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram give information about how to Soyuz can go to other space with rocket.
Overall, there are essentially eight stages in the space, space rocket process, beginning with falls away and spacecraft, enters orbit, finally three stages. However, we can see clear more if we look at the specific stage.
In the first stage, when astronauts start a new journey, used rocket blasts go to space. After rocket blasts go to space and it will disappear in the space. Rocket blasts will be vanish and the spaceship’s shell fall off. Spacecraft and orbit go to space. After being gathered, the spacecraft are taken to enter orbit where they are traveled to some universities. In the fifth stage, Soyuz spacecraft docks with ISS.
When spacecraft was landing ISS, it separated from the ISS. In the seven stage, the spacecraft separates into orbitial, service, and descent modules. Finally, when spacecraft separated modules then they will used modules parachutes and landing on the ground.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...ecraft separated modules then they will used modules parachutes and landing on the g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54964426363 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1367949539 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153073830515 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652723402636 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667425013436 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110403685367 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838855008722 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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