Describe a fear you had to overcome. How did you overcome it?
In my opinion, a significant and common emotion present in everyone's lives is the “Fear”. Fear could have various reasons, which depend on person to person, such as some being afraid of mountain-climbing, swimming, going out, riding a bike, and many more. Nevertheless, there are also many ways to overcome this issue.
I am a happy-going person anyway, but yes, sometimes I also have a fear, and it is a fear of communication whenever I get a chance to socialize with others. Being a little bit of an introvert type of person; I feel happy doing my own stuff such as reading books, watching TV, cooking, singing, gardening etc. whenever I go out and meet with other people, I feel hesitant to talk with them. And whenever there is a talk with others, I try to finish it as soon as possible. Sometimes, I also get conscious of my behaviour, while having communication with others. For instance, I used to think whether I am talking in the right manner or not.
However, I also realized that the habit of communicating less sometimes is not good, since, it has lot of benefits and it helps in making good friends too, so I always keep trying to enhance my communication skills. To improve this, I try to get involved in talks more than earlier and joined classes for group discussion, which helped me in improving. After one month of the classes, I have seen a lot of improvement in me. Now I do not feel any hesitation in talking to others, even to strangers also. The best part is now I always try to initiate a discussion, which is amazing for me.
In conclusion, I can say that, yes, I faced a fear of communication with others, however, by practising daily and focusing on the improvement I have overcome this feeling. Now, I feel like a confident and positive person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61635220126 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90495921187 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9812130005 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629343092534 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234912364121 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398823798702 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541530934716 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428829258093 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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