The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use.
The bar chart displays a huge change in the amount of people visiting a community website in its first and second years of use.
The average number of visits to the website in the first year is around 25 000 times with most of the bars reaching the 30000 mark and above during August and Ferbruary. Those highest record are in October and February that exceeds 40000 times of visiting. From March to May, the website has a drop in a number of visiting. Apirl’s the lowest with the figure just merely above 10000. Then it rose abruptly to nearly 40000 again in June.
On the other hand, for the second year running, the website has a much lower rate of visitors. The highest amount of visits recorded in this year is in January with the figure is above 20000, which is half of the amount of that the year before. The figure gradually decreased and have no noticeable rise from the next month and months afterward.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...in its first and second years of use. The average number of visits to the webs...
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...bruptly to nearly 40000 again in June. On the other hand, for the second year r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49101796407 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14387983156 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1549796113 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379922534747 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134657701337 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169886966668 0.0843802449381 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294711466603 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179450407715 0.0819641961636 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.