Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist injust laws.
Laws are what differentiates a nation, its people from other nations. It plays a cruicial role in mending peoples behaviour and attribute. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the claim, we as a citizen of a nation having its constitution and democracy have right to decide for ourselves between what is right and what is wrong.
For example, during Covid-19 pandemic at the early stages of the outbreak people were confused and having very little information about the virus and thus following public norms were considered as a necessity, yet few dogmatic citizens thought covid-19 as harmless and got affected by it. In these cases people have a right to do what seems to them as appropriate but as a responsible citizen he/she should have followed the public norms created for his/her safety as well as safety of others. However, it was observed that some afffected people were kept under observation more than usual period, for no reasons and people were opposing this unjustice which seems appropriate as oppostion to unjust is a citizen's right.
Additionally, suppose a person is falsely accused for a crime is unable to prove himself/herself free of guilt is forced to attend courts numerous time, which costs the invidual a hefty amount of time and money as well as affects his/her mental health. Thus, amends should be made regarding people whose cases are taking longer time than usual and resistance to such unjust is acceptable.
Some people may argue that in above case a person who is really guilty may use this as a loophole and escape punishments for his/her crimes. I personally believe that firsty all laws should be very pragmatic and should be acceptable for all. Most of the citien of a nation are never our once or twice come in contact in judicial system and for such people understanding numerous unpractical laws is not possible. To wrap things up, I would like to say that passing laws in a constituency should include more public involement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 679, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his unjustice which seems appropriate as oppostion to unjust is a citizens right....
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Line 2, column 704, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a citizen' or simply 'citizens'?
Suggestion: a citizen; citizens
... appropriate as oppostion to unjust is a citizens right. Additionally, suppose a person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91616766467 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69156847552 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583832335329 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1242227275 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.833333333 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 5.21951772744 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0670985752338 0.243740707755 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032298432381 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375619476622 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420849918006 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330570597141 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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