Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living.
What is your opinion about this?
What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
We are living in a rapidly changing world that is backed by the advance of modern technologies. As a matter of fact, today’s world is capable of providing humans with the convenience that they are desired. That said, a majority of people claim that this is the golden period to live in throughout entire history. This essay will delve into the author’s opinion and suggest another exciting period to live in.
Firstly, we may mention the indisputable fact that today’s life quality has been dramatically raised over the few decades primarily because of the revolutionary of technology. Take smartphones as an example, ever since the creation of it, people have been given the ability to deal with everyday tasks effectively by this multi-functional device. However, advancements in medical treatments and methods is lengthening human life expectancy, therefore creating another issue named overpopulation. The most familiar example of this is the overload of public infrastructure such as hospitals, schools, and roads. As a result, these facilities become less efficient and sluggish in providing the necessary value for the people.
On the other hand, another intriguing bygone time is the period before smartphones were invented. Although smartphones are a fascinating invention of humankind, they are dominating human life by making people spend many hours interacting with virtual applications rather than socializing as a part of the community. Humans will always want to take part in society, and because of that, the time before smartphones is when people need to socialize with each other physically.
In conclusion, although it is true that many people claim now is the perfect time to live, I believe each period of time in history has its own attractive story. As for the pros and cons of today’s world, technology has been raising the living standard for people, and overpopulation has become a potential threat to humankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...he perfect time to live, I believe each period of time in history has its own attractive story...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33656957929 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02191906694 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7128960271 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181459756696 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604109903261 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065417256185 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114074473889 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624777894047 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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