Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Moving to a new town or country is a significant decision that many people face in their lives. While some individuals may worry about losing their old friends, I firmly believe that there are many benefits to this experience. In this essay, I will explain why I disagree with the idea that moving to a new place is often not a good thing because of losing old friends.
To begin with, thanks to modern technology, it is much easier to stay connected with friends who live far away. Social media platforms, messaging apps, and video call software have made communication more accessible than ever before. For example, one can easily use video call software like Skype, Zoom or FaceTime to talk face-to-face with their friends from anywhere in the world. With these technologies, distance is no longer a barrier to maintaining friendships. Moreover, keeping in touch with old friends can also provide a source of comfort and familiarity during the process of adjusting to a new place.
Another advantage of moving to a new town or country is the opportunity to meet new people and make new friends. This can be an enriching experience that broadens one's horizons and helps them learn about different cultures and lifestyles. For instance, when people move to a new place, they can join social clubs, attend community events, or take part in local activities. Through these activities, they can connect with like-minded individuals who share their interests and values. Making new friends can also provide a sense of belonging and support in a new environment.
In conclusion, while it is true that moving to a new town or country can be challenging and may involve leaving behind old friends, I believe that the benefits of this experience far outweigh the drawbacks. With modern technology, it is easier than ever to stay connected with old friends, and the opportunity to make new friends can be a rewarding and enriching experience. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the notion that moving to a new place is often not a good thing because of losing old friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e an enriching experience that broadens ones horizons and helps them learn about dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94555873926 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76917457851 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495702005731 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4988744489 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333763006946 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121746993877 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887221793047 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222455367845 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627014336814 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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