The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The given maps are shown the industrial area of Norbiton at present and the plan to reconstruct of this site.
in the future, all of the factorys will be disapeared instead of that is the apprear of a major of housing and a different building.
In the northwest, the factorys will be destroyed and the housing and the road will be added. In addition, the plan in the southwest will be replaced by the shops. Moreover, the river above the center of the map will be seperated into two to built the brand new brigde lead to a new housing and the farmland will be removed to the northeast of the map.
In the right of the map has a lot of changes. All of the factorys in the right of the map will be declined and the housing will be added. Moreover, the playground will be built among the inhabitant. At the end of the road which used to lead to the factory will be reconstructed to be a school. In addition, the medical centre will be added near by the center of town
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- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... the plan to reconstruct of this site. in the future, all of the factorys will be...
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Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...construct of this site. in the future, all of the factorys will be disapeared instead of ...
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Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... right of the map has a lot of changes. All of the factorys in the right of the map will b...
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Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ition, the medical centre will be added near by the center of town
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23243243243 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4600593269 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421621621622 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9481706887 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737894246915 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463713318552 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700159850386 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808364523587 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987759406973 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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