The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future.
The map reveals the extensive transformation that the industrial area has undergone between now and future.
Overall, there are a major change in this area, from industrial to housing area. The North portion receive the most noticeably transformation, with the disappearance of entrance and reception and the addition of two bed room house blocks and communal garden.
At the present, there is an entrance a reception area on the North. In the opposite side, there are office blocks and canteen. The factory located on the East region. There is a parking portion and a storage next to it.
With regard to changes that will happen in the future, the parking and storage area will be replaced with 3 bed room house and 4 bed room house respectively. The factory has been removed and parking area and apartment will be introduced. The entrance and reception region in the North will be replaced by the complex of 2 bed room house and communal garden, while the parking garages will be taken place where the office blocks and canteen are situated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...e area will be replaced with 3 bed room house and 4 bed room house respectively. The ...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...ed with 3 bed room house and 4 bed room house respectively. The factory has been remo...
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Line 4, column 331, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...e replaced by the complex of 2 bed room house and communal garden, while the parking ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90449438202 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65518836419 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505617977528 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6347066736 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303475575599 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126992991827 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127924374416 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189926671644 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725509986203 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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